Yeah, here it is...
I was one of the first ones to watch this here on newgrounds when it was fresh out of judgement with a fantastic score of 4.78 or something. Why I didn't review - I was dubious. I wasn't sure how I feel about it. Now I think I'm more clear.
Let's start with expectations: Probably at least 90% of the visitors on this site know what Brackenwood is and a lot of people knew that it's coming and were waiting patiently for it to come. This puts you under a lot of pressure and you dealt with it in a good manner. Graphics are incredible, as always, but that is expected when you release a cartoon. I was curious to find out what the hell waterlollies are, and you met the expectations there also - clever idea.
There are a lot of things that bug me about this movie though.
The first thing - style. For me this is not a Flash movie. This is something to be shown on TV. My concept about web flash animation is that it's something underground, something that you cannot see on TV, that's why I visit sites like newgrounds - to watch cartoons that are impossible to be seen on TV. You released a cartoon that is so graphically intense that makes me lucky that I have a relatively new machine to watch it on. But what about the majority of people - yeah, they can probably watch it on low quality without too much lag, but watching Waterlollies on low in just plain WRONG. Because it's strength is in the graphics.
The fact that you chose Flash for your development as an artist is like a heavyweight boxer who goes into the lightweight category to kick some ass. It is simply not your field.
But lets concentrate on the movie - I think strong story, but again - it ended suddenly, and I asume the reason is only one - Flash capacity. The way the action was flowing suggested another 4 or 5 minutes for resolving the story. But then the file would be 20 megs - completely unsuitable for viewing in Flash format. So you had to cut it short and it's just... not working that great.
And looking at Brackenwood in general - you've created something that hits every possible target audience - from 4 to 100 years old and every social audience at the same time - and it leaves me wondering: are you having fun telling your stories or you desperately try to become popular (which you already are).
I fear that all this may look negative and this is not my intention. I admire your creativity and talent. But thats not all. This is not all it takes. You are also devoted to what you are doing and only an animator can realize all the hard work you have put in order to complete such project.
I'll confess - I've studied many of your movies stopping them frame by frame and I've learned a lot from you. It sucks that you cannot open this file offline :)))
I just felt like telling you all that.
I wish you luck with all your future projects, Adam.